why me?

why me?

A Poem by DarkArtz 0703
"

love can be twisted....

"

he told me sweet lies

and forgot the promises

in a thousand pieces my heart lays

nothing but memories and forgotten kisses

remain of us

and now I am broke because


once again my love has left

my engagement cancelled

now there's nothing left

he did it and doesn't care how I felt

he could have said something sooner

now I'm a lost little boomer


a friend of mine calls me that

my brother held me until I stopped crying

35 hours straight crying about that

he used me and started lying

he never loved me he screamed in my face

I feel alone.... out of place....

© 2018 DarkArtz 0703


Author's Note

DarkArtz 0703
once broke and then fixed.... only to break once again...

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we all been in that cycle ,you should be in a better place now

Posted 3 Years Ago


Where is the push back? I like the poem. But there is no push back? Did you write a second poem to accompany this one?
Some people don't wish to sleep in coffins. Some people don't like being hurt.
Some people look into the eyes of those that hurt them and tell them to stop.
Am I revealing myself in my review of your poem? I like what you have wrote.
Soldier on.

Posted 5 Years Ago


There’s a place for anyone who shares how they feel because someone somewhere feels better when they read it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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DarkArtz 0703
DarkArtz 0703

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About
people judge what they cant handle. I judge what I can't help. every second was painful enough... but to relive it.... it kills me. Mother of two boys one in heaven and the other with me more..

Writing
You You

A Poem by DarkArtz 0703