I CANT LIE ANYMORE

I CANT LIE ANYMORE

A Poem by DarkArtz 0703
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my ex fiancé cheated... and this is how I cope

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I can't lie


it's like I have to stay high

to keep my mind off you

drinking and smoking i'm up too high

each one will eventually fall through

I can't lie I want you back

can't forget.. not when we were like that


your eyes spoke volumes

your body even more

now im left getting high off the fumes

and drinking until I hit the floor

I can't lie I need you here

I love you even though you were never sincere

 

© 2018 DarkArtz 0703


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DarkArtz 0703
rough draft I guess let me know what you think

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This writing is very powerful. At message of betrayed love and desire still to be with that person. I had simulate experience like you. But at my case i was done with that person. Cause that was last drop of poison what i can tolerate. But comeback to your piece. It's really very emotional. At using of ordinary words to describe how you really feel. Make this poem very authentic and realistic.

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Added on May 21, 2018
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DarkArtz 0703
DarkArtz 0703

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people judge what they cant handle. I judge what I can't help. every second was painful enough... but to relive it.... it kills me. Mother of two boys one in heaven and the other with me more..

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A Poem by DarkArtz 0703