A Poem by Dark Beauty

Trail of tears forever remains
graceful heart haunted by the cry's in the wind
waters rush the shore once more
cursing beat heard no more
decaying truth of bruises

Ticking away in silence
these tears remain
longing for expression
once upon dreams

As time moves by
tears flow on by as seasons flourish with sunshine
a warm heart
beating vibrantly again
I am turning the pages
of me and you

© 2011 Dark Beauty

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"decaying truth of bruises" love that line. If I may describe the image it evokes in my mind whereby when a bruise heals "decaying" the proof it was ever there is known by no one but the holder... powerful words.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Dearly beloved, we are gathered here today to bury this relationship forever.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another rough draft that is well done in this form alone, I cannot see what additions you could make to improve this. I wish that my rough drafts were this well oiled!

Posted 12 Years Ago

The poem must have been meant for me! lol
Well when the time is right, I am going to dedicate this poem to my boyfriend if that is okay with you?
I really enjoyed reading this poem & the words you use.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Such a wonderful rough draft,
I like what you have so far.
Deep and dark, well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago

For a rough draft, I find this amazing. Dark and powerful.

Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Tears seem to release the pressure of the heart when overwhelmed with joy, love and longing. Your tears were shed and their transparency of a mixture of joy, love and longing are sweetly and bitterly combined here. A heart tugging expression.

Posted 12 Years Ago

this was so great ..
i liked that :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

you are very gifted in the descriptives...your reader can emerse themselves into this environment

Posted 12 Years Ago

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10 Reviews
Added on September 9, 2011
Last Updated on September 18, 2011


Dark Beauty
Dark Beauty

Tucson, AZ

Love to write Poetry, and SpokenWord looking for reviews with good or bad feedback as I will give reviews as well and any ideas are welcome!!!!! "Keep Writing, my pen is my Thy soul shall fi.. more..


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