Time

Time

A Poem by Dark Beauty

Each moment moves fast
present day does not last
full of tainted pride
glorious rays shed no light
at the break of dawn
The will is weakened
for darkness stands ahead

Evening soon falls
upon bloody swords of violent vengence
my shield falls
broken and bruised
and the day is done

The battle of defeat
a cursed memory forever to last
a new day will arise
through the corridors of wicked time
demons of the dark hand
rose above as they wander over our will
which fell fast to rest
as the dark stood still

© 2011 Dark Beauty


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Excellent poem, full of great lines and flaw is awesome too!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A poem of bleak struggle against the forces of darkness...the words of the broken and bruised ... seductive intheir dark pain

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful. I like this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well written. Brilliant use of imagery and metaphors. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this. To me it has great meaning. The words touched me deeply. Nice job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I enjoyed reading this.. I like the last stanza..... great write...

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the tone of lines and the strength of how they move and realign.

Chris

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a very nice piece. I enjoyed reading it. Great job,

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Dark Beauty
Dark Beauty

Tucson, AZ



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