Dark Symphony

Laughter plays sweet music
 dance by night pervades,
 I am free, wings of black unfold
 I sing from the depth of my malicious slumber.
 Taunting melodies I keep
 lurking about going back to that place in darkened time
 where darkness played melodies
 so fine and sweet to the ears of dark
 the greatest tune breaths
 The Blood Fiery Night
with eternal flames
that do not fade nor sleep
consuming  hellish melodies
forever darkness will reap

Reviews

[Jupiter Jazz]

First 4 lines killed it for me (I mean that in a good way). I like the dark eeriness of it all. Good job. Yosh!

[Ruth]

Powerful hon! You take darkness and manipulate it! Superb work love...your flow is fantastic here! xx

[.........]

Has a lot of truth in it. "With eternal flames that do not fade nor sleep" is a beautiful line. The pain never is going to decide to let up; you have to conquer it. "Forever darkness will reap". Beautiful

[Raven Starhawk]

Oh the music of this spills throughout my body. I can hear its dark cords play my heart strings. Brilliant.

[~*. Jade Black .*~]

Even for a short poem I had a brilliant image in my mind truly a great poem. Wonderful job.

[Sleepless]

wow! impressive way to tell what you feel amazing !:)

[Poetic Beauty]

This reminds me of a demon or vampire. It is very descriptive and you could make a story out of this poem. It is done well and takes down a dark path to flames that burn forever.

[rwar ish me]

this is very nice, dark, well done
~Amai

[Enigma]

The title fits so perfectly. Its a glimpse into the dark world we create in our mind and how it functions throughout. Decsriptive and well penned.