Forever

A tasteful kiss
forever mine
I am wrapped
within the depth of
his caged soul

Drops of passion
drip from my
mortal lips
ecstasy enticing
to the touch as we
entwine as one

Sweet nectar
over flowing within
the blood red moon
dew drops of sinful play
he forever

Beckons my heart away

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Cool work. Worth the read, that's for sure.

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice poem of passion. I like the way you described the situation and the action. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Passionate write, beautifully penned. Nicely done!

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that was quite clever..you are able to create a scenerio without really saying to much..that is artful..

[K.C. Zbryk]

You have quite a talent to capture romance and passion with such a brief poem. you convey all of the emotions without having into the erotic, and this is something that many cannot do. Amazingly well penned.

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Very powerful and romantic poem. The last sentence get me shivers - in a good way. :)

[Shep]

Very romantic and visual. Loved it loved it, nicely done.

[Jupiter Jazz]

How romantic and sensual

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Quite a pretty poem.

[Marie Harrison]

ecstasy enticing
to the touch as we
entwine as one

enticing prose