A Poem by Dark Beauty

Silver moon light
come and fill my soul
charge me for battle
to endure the death of night

Morbid creatures lurk
closing my eyes they show me
the darkened wrathful vengence
I must endure

Moving within me
capturing the moon light held
no strength to fight
I am forever transformed
into this hellish darkness

Caged by the battle of defeat
a slave to morbid creatures
I have been torn

© 2011 Dark Beauty

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This poem I can identify with now for I am in a dark place of defeat. Tomorrow or the next day perhaps, I will be less able to identify myself with it's feeling. This poem is a great capture of the pain of human mortal existence.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Wow you made me Wow :) Amazing!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Always amazes me the depth to your imagery love, one fabulous write after another! :) xoxo

Posted 11 Years Ago

very nice work... darkly beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


Posted 11 Years Ago

Haunting and beautiful. Loved the darkness of this piece. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago

The imagery is mind obliterating if I can state it like that! I love this poem for its fantastic imagination and furthermore, the emotion conveyed. Nice job.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Such a way you have in bringing a story like this to life. Your words are intelligently conveyed and mark a special and unique language between well drawn characters. It is a wonderful read and I am always open for further installments should there be any.

Posted 11 Years Ago

"Silver moon light
come and fill my soul
charge me for battle
to endure the death of night"

My favorite stanza!

Posted 11 Years Ago

I really like this.
Its got great imagry.
Dark but wonderful.
Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on October 14, 2011
Last Updated on October 14, 2011


Dark Beauty
Dark Beauty

Tucson, AZ

Love to write Poetry, and SpokenWord looking for reviews with good or bad feedback as I will give reviews as well and any ideas are welcome!!!!! "Keep Writing, my pen is my Thy soul shall fi.. more..


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