A Poem by Dark Beauty

Silver moon light
come and fill my soul
charge me for battle
to endure the death of night

Morbid creatures lurk
closing my eyes they show me
the darkened wrathful vengence
I must endure

Moving within me
capturing the moon light held
no strength to fight
I am forever transformed
into this hellish darkness

Caged by the battle of defeat
a slave to morbid creatures
I have been torn

© 2011 Dark Beauty

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Wonderful imagry. Dark and brroding. It draws stories from the page and my immagination. wonderful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago

you have a distinct style all of your own, well done

Posted 11 Years Ago

Fanstastic write...dark imagery done perfectly :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

I see some darkness in this poem...Awesome writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Deeply dark... who's hiding there. Top draw.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I guess the real question is, do the creatures reside in the dark or in the darkness behind your eyes. Either way it was a brilliant write.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Great write:)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Beyond the literal meanings (which are wonderfully expressed and crafted) this poem has a comment on our world and its darkness that is also quite compelling. Great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago

WOW Awesome job! =)

Posted 11 Years Ago

I too feel the battle one feels fighting off depression..and even addiction.. excellent write...x

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on October 14, 2011
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Dark Beauty
Dark Beauty

Tucson, AZ

Love to write Poetry, and SpokenWord looking for reviews with good or bad feedback as I will give reviews as well and any ideas are welcome!!!!! "Keep Writing, my pen is my Thy soul shall fi.. more..


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