A Poem by Dark Beauty

Silver moon light
come and fill my soul
charge me for battle
to endure the death of night

Morbid creatures lurk
closing my eyes they show me
the darkened wrathful vengence
I must endure

Moving within me
capturing the moon light held
no strength to fight
I am forever transformed
into this hellish darkness

Caged by the battle of defeat
a slave to morbid creatures
I have been torn

© 2011 Dark Beauty

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Dark indeed. While this piece speaks about creatures in dark places, this piece has a maturity to it. It relates the darkness within to the world with your stunning prose. I can imagine this speaking about depression and death because I feel that darkness within sometimes, and it can be scary. Nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I like the feel and the desire of this poem. The darkness can bring you in and hold you forever. No weakness in this short poem. Direct and to the point. A outstanding poem. I like the strong description.

Posted 11 Years Ago morbid! i could the darkness all through this magnificent poem!
greatly written!^^

Posted 11 Years Ago

i think u have out done urself with this 1. thought it was penned well. especially enjoyed the last few lines.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I loved the part you write about forever being transformed into the hellish darkness.... I think a lot of people can relate to this. Beautiful writing dear xx

Posted 11 Years Ago

Caged by the battle of defeat
a slave to morbid creatures
I have been torn

A great way to end a poem, idk why but those lines really caught my eye...great job :D

Posted 11 Years Ago

"Charge me for battle" Nice!! I enjoyed this dark tale of basking in the full moon. Excellent work. Great imagery.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Often have I penned to the death of night for this the time I feel most vunerable, for day brings not only light but others awakened from their dreams willingly to destroy mine. Beautiful poem, love the underlined sadness and the bittersweet tale. Keep em' coming

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on October 14, 2011
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Dark Beauty
Dark Beauty

Tucson, AZ

Love to write Poetry, and SpokenWord looking for reviews with good or bad feedback as I will give reviews as well and any ideas are welcome!!!!! "Keep Writing, my pen is my Thy soul shall fi.. more..


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