Nightfall Smiles

Nightfall Smiles

A Poem by Dark Beauty

Blood red moon
fills my breathe
dark passion falls
my lips bleed
from the cold morbid kiss

Painful transformation
so beautiful and sweet
my flesh reborn
from pure dark nectar
I begin to fade

Seeping in my veins
my new world home
shadow depths reign
posessing and cursing
thoughts remain

Imprints of light
left far behind
lurking play unfolds
as nightfall smiles
all pulse of heart gone away

I am bound in darkened laughter



© 2011 Dark Beauty


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Nice and interesting as I definitely have a nightfall smile on me. Some of the lines just rhymed so wonderful that I even especially liked "Painful transformation
so beautiful and sweet
my flesh reborn
from pure dark nectar"
Anyways nicely done on such a mystical night. =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This makes me think of the transformation from human to vampire. This is eerie and subtle letting the mind wonder in the directions that it chooses. Well done and the imagery is dark.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nightfall, What a fun and fantastic time to be in. Very good write and very much a part of what is in all of us I think.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the poem. A dark poem with strong desires and need. I like how you added laughter. A dark spirit would be a joyous one. No weakness in this poem. Just a excellent poem to read.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think 'nightfall smiles' would be a perfect title for this. It seems like you are happy about this transformation and so as the shadow falls across your face you begin to smile. Acceptance of the transformation. Incredably well written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ohhhh love it! =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Enchanting comes to my mind. Upon reading this I was enchanted by the choice of words you played with so vividly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is interesting... Think I been reading too much twilight but it seems like you are being made into a creature of the night

Posted 12 Years Ago


I am bound in darkened laughter.........this line alone is fantastic all by itself. A wonderful dark piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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