STUPID!

I have a friend that went out with this girl. This girl put my friend through so much s**t for three years. When my friend and this girl broke-up, my friend told me all about it. When i was driving home, i wrote this...

STUPID!

 

I feel stupid because I tried,

I feel stupid because I cried,

Over you?! What a lie,

How stupid of me to try.

I feel stupid because your love is something I never see,

I always knew that you didn’t really love me.

I’m stupid because I loved you,

More than anyone will ever know,

But to me, your love is something you never show.

I feel stupid because I loved you,

And you didn’t really care,

How stupid of me to believe,

That love is always fair.

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviews

[rachel <3]

love is never fair is it? your friend seems to have gone through hell with this person.
beautiful write. i know that lots of people can relate to this.

[Wildecat]

Dear DarkHeart, for a 14 year old young lady you write some wonderful poems. Will be reading more of your work. Oh and thanks for the friend request, a pleasure to be your friend.

[Shelly Araujo]

Hey DH, your words remind me strongly of regrets I had for many years over a lost love. I think you sorted your feelings much earlier in life than I did (teens to 40's) and I finally realized only recently that as heartbreaking as it was, I still got something good from the time. I felt stupid and kicked myself a million times over the years. Just remember we are not stupid, we are big hearted! :-)

[Craig]

Nice poem

[Ravenskald]

the saying is alls fair in love and war
me i'm not sure i believe it ...
unless the fair is scarborough

(refernces
shake spear (i think) all
and acarborough fair (trad english folk : see mediaeval baebes for a version)
similar to shul a run (trad irish : see Clannad for a vesion)
The latter always makes me cry, but then I ahve an irish russian soul ;-)
(so it has been said )

[That Weirdo You Just Mi..]

Yet another awesome piece! I love everything that you have posted on here. Keep up the good work. Peace to you and the world

[Fear Corrupts!]

I like this,
it's a very honest piece of work, obviously.

Good Write,

[ Fear Corrupts! ]