Nature's Lap

The sweet fragrance from the brightly colored jewels seem to call someone

The thick canopy shields me from the unforgiving sun

The birds chirp melodiously in unison

I listen to them, utter non comprehension

while the gossiping leaves whispers secrets to the winds.

There is no better place to be , it is sure

How wonderful it is to be in the lap of Mother Nature!

The nightingale sings a lullaby sweet

Laying on nature's lush carpet green

I close my eyes, drifting into a perpetual sleep.

Author's Note

Sorry for not posting or reviewing for a long time. I was actually gone to visit my grandparents.
I hope you like this poem!! Feel free to review, constructive criticism appreciated

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Since I live next to a huge wilderness on the central California coast, I am very much in touch with nature every day. I love writing about nature & I love your poem about nature. I love the things you choose to highlight & the way you describe everything in a fresh way. Your respectful enjoyment can be felt & it’s the same way I feel, too! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Elizabeth]

Thank you so much for your kind words.... They inspire me to keep writing :)

[Christy the Poetic Hear..]

Being in the nature's lap is therapeutic and inspiring. The feeling is just indescribable. Nice writing!!!!!

[Elizabeth]

Thank you for your kind words... I really appreciate it :)

[Neville]

Can't beat nature my friend nicely writ.........N

[Elizabeth]

Thank you!

[Neville]

my pleasure.........N

[lightsong]

there is quietness filling Your words, a peaceful spirit writing with a serene soft blissful feeling, Your real personal touch what makes it special, this "gratitude" poem from You, thank You my friend.

[Elizabeth]

Thank you for your review... It really made my day

[lightsong]

You are welcome :)

[Lydia Shutter]

A joyous write of nature. Great imagery. Lydi**

[Elizabeth]

Thank you!

[AcasualPawn]

Its refreshing with good rhyme...
Love it..
Keep the good work

[Elizabeth]

Thank you!

[Zoya]

This put a smile across my face. Nature...In all its beauty...penned down in your words. Keen observer of nature you are. Beautifully written!

[Elizabeth]

thank you so much!!

[Zoya]

No problem

[Chase Dylan]

The rhymes on the end of each line are especially unique and well thought out syllable sounds... Made the whole thing almost magical... Well penned...

[Elizabeth]

thank you so much for your review

[L.C. Jarrette]

Wow!the imagery is so awesome! Love it my friend..loved it!

[Elizabeth]

thank you so much!!