Lost

oh to be lost in you

I want to be lost
in the whirlpool of your eyes
A beautiful demise,
the ringing of your laugh
the curve of your smile

I want to be lost
under a thousand twinkling lights
A dangerous delight,
sprayed silver on a black canvas
swirling above my eyes

I want to be lost
in the stories of your words
A free spirited bird
singing crafted colloquy
building tales absurd

I want to be lost
in a place with no return
It could be anywhere
Jupiter, Mars, Uranus, Saturn

Author's Note

super random

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Oh, this poem is amazing! There is a thin line between being lost and free. If you want to be lost, you want to be free. Marooned on a remote island or stranded on a distant planet? How about in the middle of a rainforest? It could even be fun alone, after all, we're never truly alone anywhere. There's always some creature unknown to us, coexisting around us. But it's also fun for a reader and author to be lost together in an amazing random poem, such as this. tyfs

[Elizabeth]

thank you so much!! Being alone is fun when you enjoy your company! I'm glad you liked this one~~ also I love the way you write reviews

[willweb]

I found myself lost within your poem and enjoying every step along the way. This was nice .

[Elizabeth]

Hi again! I'm glad that you found this enjoyable!! Thank you for all your kind words

[Chris Shaw]

I like super random. I also like the idea of being completely lost in something which takes my attention away from all that is trouble. First of yours I have read Elizabeth, pleased I stopped by.

Chris

[Elizabeth]

Thank you for your kind words!! I'm glad you liked it