The End

The End

A Poem by DarkRainbowPie
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This poem describes a person's last moments before ending their life.

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Holding the sharp point to my wrist,
Clenching the knife within my fist.
Blocking it out, closing my eyes,

Regretting not saying my final goodbyes.
Taking one last look at the note on the floor,

Sitting up beside it, leaning back on the door.

 

Puddles forming on the tiles,
Eyeliner dripping into different styles.

My heart is pounding, nearly ready to go,
Preparing myself to let the blood flow.

Staring down at my wrist and counting to four,

Taking one last breath...

 

...then breathing no more.

© 2013 DarkRainbowPie


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DarkRainbowPie
All feedback is GREATLY appreciated, cheers!

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I love the imagery used here. Great piece :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkRainbowPie

11 Years Ago

Thanks very much ^_^
Mr Dunne Poetry

11 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
You've managed to make this so real, like you were watching yourself from some detached viewpoint, pounding on glass but no one can hear.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkRainbowPie

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much, you have an interesting view point :)
Lonesome Traveler

11 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
This is so sad and tragic. Your words told a painfully true story so many people go through in a unique way . Your a really good writer. Look forward to seeing more of your work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkRainbowPie

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much, glad you liked it. :)
This is a very touching poem, it really brought me to that place and made it seem real. You really got talent!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkRainbowPie

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much, always great to get good feedback :)

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Added on January 20, 2013
Last Updated on January 20, 2013
Tags: Suicide, Sadness, Depression, Selfharm, Loneliness, Fear, Anger, Anguish, Defeat

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DarkRainbowPie
DarkRainbowPie

Dublin, Ireland



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Hey there, guys. My name's Annie, I'm 18, from Ireland. All there is to really know about me is that I am a MASSIVE nerd (...would like to wager that I actually do live and breathe science at .. more..

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