So Go Ahead...

So Go Ahead...

A Poem by DarkRainbowPie
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This is basically a quick write about heartbreak that I started a good while ago and got finished today....so, maybe not so quick in the end, haha.

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Heart ache,
Heart break.
I fucked up,
Made a mistake.

So go ahead...

Rip it to pieces,
Tear it apart.
Finish it now,
Since you're at the start.

So go ahead...

Kill it now,
Hack it in two.
Stand back and we'll see,
What you can f*****g do.

So go ahead...

Lock away the memories,
Throw away the key.
Seems you and me,
Just weren't meant to be.

So go ahead...

Go ahead.

Go ahead.

End it.

© 2013 DarkRainbowPie


Author's Note

DarkRainbowPie
All feedback is greatly appreciated, thank you! :D

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There's a beautiful flow to your words, they feel very fluid and move with eachother excellently :) it's a beautiful poem Mayo, be proud :3

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkRainbowPie

6 Years Ago

Thanks 'Dublin', means a lot x')
Amazing! I could totally feel your anger towards whoever. I muzt say your poem kicked butt. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkRainbowPie

6 Years Ago

Haha, thanks very much :')
very powerful and a lot of anger. In a way i kind of wished there was more anger involved i mean he ripped your heart out! the beginning started off nice though. Great work :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkRainbowPie

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much :) Might try to add a little more rage then, haha x'D
Chris Dominguez

6 Years Ago

lol that is always the best way to express everything.
DarkRainbowPie

6 Years Ago

Indeed. x''D

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Added on April 8, 2013
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Tags: heartbreak, broken heart, love, end, so go ahead, pain, distress, relationships, sorrow, remorse

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DarkRainbowPie
DarkRainbowPie

Dublin, Ireland



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Hey there, guys. My name's Annie, I'm 18, from Ireland. All there is to really know about me is that I am a MASSIVE nerd (...would like to wager that I actually do live and breathe science at .. more..

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