No, you don't have to be my friend.

I wrote this for my friend; Cory Smith: I love you Cory...

No, you don't have to be my friend.

No, you never really had to understand.

No, please just let go of my hand.

Just leave me and my broken heart.

Just like ever-thing else you tore apart.

You were truly always my number one.

Now I sit here bleeding and alone.

If you love him so much then why,

am I the one that makes you cry?



No, you don't have to be my friend.

No, you never really had to understand.

No, please just let go of my hand.

Just know I will always be by your side.

Just now I have died, Committed Suicide.

You were not, or ever, here to save me.

You were with him, now alone with a baby.

Now you see true love was never there.

If you understood the pain he gave me.

Why did you date him, and forsake me?


No, you don't have to be my friend.

No, you never really had to understand.

No, please just let go of my hand.

Just, because of your selfish pride,

you lost him, in a fight, and I died.

Now, you are alone, and you cry,

Tonight, the baby and you both die...


No, you were my very best friend.

No, you always did try to understand.

No, please don't let go of my hand.

Author's Note

This is not sad, this is not a suicide note: I love Cory as a friend and a Sister, I do not like that John Curtis Mason. So if you read this just know, everyone hearts' are always broken, just because of the tears and life that they have took.

Everything is better then Heaven, but it's Always worse then Hell!

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Love is always a double edged sword in one way or another -- sometimes there is love for someone who has someone else -- this has a beautiful, lyrical feel to it.

[Enigma Monster]

I loved this, could feel the heartache. Beautifully written. And the last line was perfect.

[Ice QueenJen]

Interesting composition, it sounds almost like a ballad.

[Helena]

Oh beautifully done S.D. So intense, human, spelling out the utter pain that some paths taken can cause. This is a fantastic contribution to my contest. Thanks so much for joining in with this heartfelt and amazing write! ~ Helena

[deeps]

Wow this one was extremely powerful. I can really feel the emotion come out too. Very well expressed.

[Lena M. P.]

Very powerful and emotional write. I can almost hear the lyrics with your guitar in the background.

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

Intense. Powerful language. Yet not always clearly communicated what you are driving at and, because of this, needs more than one reading to make perfectly clear. But I liked it.