Please stay

Please stay

A Poem by Becky Clancy

The day he left me, I was gonna swear off a relationship for good
But then you came along and cheered me up
3 days past since he left, you decided to wanted to be with me
I said yes

 

You and I have known each other for a year
You claim that you wanted to be with me since the day we met
You told me that you fell in love with me since you first laid your eyes on me
You want to know why I didnt start dating you til now?

Its because I was afraid
I was afraid of the age difference between you and I
I was afraid if I started dating you people would judge us
I was afraid people were gonna break us up
And I was afraid to get hurt again

You and I have been together for almost 2 months
But Ive had feelings for you since I first saw you as well
Your a really sweet guy, your so caring
I want you to be with me forever
So let me ask you this

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Will you please stay?

© 2013 Becky Clancy


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Beautiful write and must I say that age is just a number. Sure, it may be quite a gap, but your feelings for eachother hold and mean so much more than that. The connection is what is important, not the age difference. Many people don't understand how age isn't and shouldn't be an issue anymore and they try to pull certain people apart who really could be meant for eachother. I understand how this is, since I've been in plenty of relationships with younger people and have made them work. We cannot help or change who we fall in love with or develop feelings for, just listen to your heart and let it guide you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A nice poem on love.Love is a very inspiring theme and the way in which you have described all the situation in words in great.Well Done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


That was very beautiful and well, Be careful..
and hey, if he deserves you he will stay... is he left that means he isnt worth it ./
well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


I enjoyed the poem. I like the story in the poem and the question at the end. Sometime we can overcome all things when we know happiness and peace. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:).....................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful write and must I say that age is just a number. Sure, it may be quite a gap, but your feelings for eachother hold and mean so much more than that. The connection is what is important, not the age difference. Many people don't understand how age isn't and shouldn't be an issue anymore and they try to pull certain people apart who really could be meant for eachother. I understand how this is, since I've been in plenty of relationships with younger people and have made them work. We cannot help or change who we fall in love with or develop feelings for, just listen to your heart and let it guide you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Extraordinary work.
I am very amazed by the innovative way you have shared your feelings to your chosen heart and to us.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent! I am sure there are people out there going through this. Great poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such exceptional work, you really showed many of the feelings someone might have. Really beautiful, thank you for sharing it with me. Please, don't hesitate to send me reading requests. (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Becky Clancy
Becky Clancy

Viroqua, WI



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