time escaping

time escaping

A Poem by DarkIriswriter

Time seems just to past you by as the day goes on

life lived is never forgotten in memories

friends, family and photgraphs scattered across ones mind

I never stopped living until the day came that you said good bye

days became weeks and as time slipped in my mind

it seemed just yesterday your promise was said

"I will come back for you, never forget."

Your promise was broken for the war continued and you were lost forever.

For the time escaped and you never got to live your life to the fullest.


© 2008 DarkIriswriter

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Heartbreaking true for many people during war times. Even morse so when it concerns self and family.

Your words here have put these thoughts and emotions into context.

Our soldiers do their duty, their families wait and hope while time seems to stand still. Unfortunately, not all enjoy the happiness of a safe homecoming.

A poignant write - well done.

jen- JG

Posted 16 Years Ago

time is the creation of our independent, most potential resemblance. goodjob for reminding me that. ~ ur friend, ~Derrick

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on May 19, 2008
Last Updated on May 25, 2008