Private Universe

Dedicated to M.C.B

We`re two of one

Through our joy and pain we carry for us

Life, like your lips, is full; of bliss and fears

Under the eclipse, in the dust of the world`s end

Our hearts guard our dreams

Whining for one another

On a pathway of clouds we toddle for each other

The fate demands its unity

We slave

Bodies interlock, spirits bind, ecstasy overtakes the mind

Sun, moon, snow, rain in behind

We happily slave

Our youth framed by tenacious years

I smile, your tears I wipe

You giggle, fall asleep in my arms

We`re free to slave

I`m in your dreams, and you are in mine

Absent of the world, absent of the heaven

Peacefully trapped in this feeling of forever

Reviews

[Bear]

Critique: (Peacefully trapped in this feeling of foreve) forever

Review: The balance between pain and pleasure, the conflict of emotions that is the path to love. I had to read this twice to soak in all the details and descriptions of the ritualistic relationship masterfully written. Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Satoshi IroTzu]

I`m always glad to see Papa-Bear enjoying my written work. It`s a motivation that stays with me forever.