Our World

Our World

A Poem by Dark Poet
"

If love is just a drug keep me under. Let's make this ocean deeper

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Life couldn't taste sweeter than this
Gazing at these stars we call ours
Inside a world we've created to become one
Learning how to love the mental and physical scars
Laying in this meadow,
Hand laced into yours
Melting from the heat of your finger tips
Carefully knocking down my doors
Blue eyes...blue eyes...
If love is just a drug keep me under
Let's make this ocean deeper
I'm going to disappear into the heat of your summer
I long for the morning,
When we face this world together
And we just keep falling
Whispering our love as if it were fragile
We'll thank these stars every night that we're here
How did they know?
Love me like you love your garden
You and I will forever grow


© 2015 Dark Poet


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Dark Poet
For You (You know who you are).

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A wonderful piece of emotion for who I'm sure was delighted to read it. You seem to have quite a grasp on seeing a relationship blossom in a sense and shape itself into a world only you and someone else know. A world within a seemingly normal world. Beautifully written. ~Never Forget

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark Poet

4 Years Ago

Thank you! I appreciate what you said


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SKY
I'm going to disappear into the heat of your summer
Laying in this meadow,
Love me like you love your garden


Opps I think I am losing myself into your world of imagination. Great Work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark Poet

3 Years Ago

It's always a compliment for someone to get lost in it!
SKY

3 Years Ago

Absolutely! Thanks for sharing the "Our World" :)
good heartfelt poem with nice intentions behind it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


A sweet poem that does well to show that one can not stand alone. When true lovers come together will forget any sorry and enjoy what the nature have to offer. Well crafted, Miss?

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark Poet

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the review!
That was very beautiful:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well written. filled with passion and emotion.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Your sentiments are clear and powerful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is most definitely a "love"ly sensations(eh? eh?....I'll walk out the door now lol). I know I haven't reviewed anything of yours in a long time, but all I can say is that your writing is as strong as I remember it being. Your choice of wording and flow are distinctive amongst your writing, and this poem is no different.

"I'm going to disappear into the heat of your summer." That is a wonderful line that demonstrates the quality of your writing, and is easily my favorite line in this piece. You have impressed once again, Dark Poet! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dark Poet

4 Years Ago

Haha I actually laughed. And thank you very much. I Always enjoy your reviews. Thanks again Dan:)
Your Title... Our world caused me to read this one. Wonderful written prose. Beautiful!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark Poet

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much! Im glad you were interested in reading it
This poem tastes sweeter than honey! That was so amazing, thank you for giving us the privilege to read this wonderful piece of awesomeness.


Insight.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful piece of writing. Keep up the good work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark Poet

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
Cecile Wonder

4 Years Ago

you are welcome

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