Adventures of A Human Noble and An Outkast Drow

Adventures of A Human Noble and An Outkast Drow

A Book by Darruesh Eetraydes

Son of the great Commander Mckellyn meets a outkast who is hated because of his race. They grow close and fight against racism,monsters, and more.


© 2010 Darruesh Eetraydes

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Darruesh Eetraydes
Short stories formed from a story i wrote. May become longer

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You did a really nice job on this. Very interesting characters, which always helps a story and your descriptions have just the right about of detail in them.

Posted 12 Years Ago

It was a pretty cool story. I like the interactions between the characters. You did a good job of giving them all their own personalities. I'm sure this story will continue to intrigue as it moves along the way. I was entertained by the scenes you depicted. I wonder a little about the past, but it always works itself out. I actually dont mind being dropped into the middle of the action. This is done in a lot of One-Shot comics as sort of a pilot episode. Nice work!

Posted 12 Years Ago

You did good with the battle scenes but there is no history to why they were there or of the men themselves. Also maybe a bit more description of the area and the enemies that they are fighting. Keep writing.

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Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on December 9, 2009
Last Updated on May 5, 2010
Tags: knives, swords, fantasy, adventure
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Yo whats up people! I'm a 19 year old class clown from Texas. I've recently gotten into writing and I'm trying to get better at it. I'm better at telling stories orally, but hey I got start at some po.. more..


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