Philosophical Mind That Enjoys Creative Writing

Philosophical Mind That Enjoys Creative Writing

A Poem by Eric Darsie

A poem about my mind.


Philosophical Mind That Enjoys Creative Writing


Mind. The holder of my thoughts, feelings, emotions.

Debated lots in the Philosophical realm--on your existence.

I know the true you. You know everything. About me.


Unable to escape you

Or even your thoughts you produce

My friend I hate

All because you know me too well

But my friend I can trust


Past five years. All the hard, Philosophical discussions we’ve been through.

Four-dimensionalism. Past, future, present, all objects have equal reality now. The present now.

Philosophy of time. Our favorite topic in the world of Philosophy.


Add in creative writing

Mix it all together

What do I get?

I’m unsure, once I know, I’ll let you know.


All I know, you hold in your hands. Mold it into what I am today.

Everything I do, all of my desires, you know. You’ll let me know someday. Right?

But you’re my mind. All that I have. All I know. All mine. My mind.

© 2011 Eric Darsie

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Added on April 9, 2011
Last Updated on April 9, 2011
Tags: Mind, Philosophy, Creative Writing, Philosophy of Time, Four-Dimensionalism, Four Dimensionalism


Eric Darsie
Eric Darsie

St. Cloud, MN

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