INvulnerable

To have a weakness does not mean you're weak.

Is there grass beyond this broken path?

For days I wander

and for days I find 

that I, to memories I left behind

grow fonder

as I become blind.

So here I am, awaiting wrath from heaven;

 wrath of men...

...before I die, remember when 

they made you cry? 

They took your tears

then locked you out and left for years

Music math, 

or friendly fears?

Fear, despite your greatest will to fight,

will cloud your mind; will cloud your sight, 

then draw the demons near.

So if tomorrow brings some unknown fate,

I will change it. I will wait

'til light appears

and drowns out hate.

So face your fears

and don't be late.

Author's Note

Please tear this apart.

Reviews

[Pax]

how can i tear this apart...that the sentiments is very loud and clear... I hear you my new friend... I agree with this:
So face your fears
and don't be late.
~ a great advice... Fear is a choice, its either you choose it or choose to ignore it and be as fearless as you can be...
well expressed thoughts...

[lee von cleef]

Fear emotion , I like the whole of the thought, So you have the yeast, now layer it, find common ground, place your battle,force the reader to a uncomfortable position after they are hooked, hard to get them to think out of their ruts ,but when you do it right they may not accept what your saying but they have stayed long enough to re examine themselves.

[lee von cleef]

Tear it apart ? why not add yo it ? or stripe it down to bare beauty? Robert Frost: "Riders" or his " Dust of snow" Me I have another take on "ON A TREE FALLEN ACROSS THE ROAD" Read mine in "Soul"