Once Upon A Time

Once Upon A Time

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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An observation on life (in free verse)

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Weren’t we all fifteen
Once upon a time…
And the world
Revolved around us and only us?
Parents were no more
Than convenient caretakers
Who had no idea
Of what was involved
In the singularity of being young…
Weren’t we the only ones…
Once upon a time
Who truly knew pain and sorrow
Ecstacy  and passion
And the crushing feel of a broken heart?
Weren’t we all  beautiful one day
Then hideous the next?
Top of the heap
Or bottom of the pit
Deeply depressed
Or supremely sublime?
Of course we were.
Weren’t we all fifteen…
…Once upon a time?...


100 words

© 2019 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


Author's Note

David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
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Yes David, it does ring a bell for me. When we are young we don't even think of getting older. We don't have a care in the world, but next thing we know, we are old and don't know where the time went! I enjoyed your poem!

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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..

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