if i didn't love her, i'd still have my teeth

Because Tommy wrote a poem about a Dominatrix, I figured I'd post my own.

falling down drunk, stairs lied

to my face and rose one step

ahead of my nose; black eyes

glitter above shattered

smile. she didn't push me

that hard, but i fell for her

just the same.

my Dominatrix

never has to scream

my name; i was born to heal.

Reviews

[SpitfireGrrrl]

I think this is my favorite of yours. It's very fun. I particularly like the end bit "never has to scream my name/i was born to heal". Precisely what she would want!

[floarealbastra10]

very sensual

[Kerry O'Connor]

The fall down the stairs perfectly set the reader up for the anti-climactic conclusion. Very witty wordplay.

[Tommy]

I don't know why, but this made me laugh. I like sadistic humor I guess. lol.

Nice Write!
RLG,
Tommy