Fundamental

Fundamental

A Poem by Dave Brown
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in a garden

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Bird on a branch

So very gentle

Flower in a garden

With raindrop on a petal

For each one to live

It is fundamental

© 2020 Dave Brown


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I liked the simplicity of this when I read it the other morning, Dave. Have thought about it how I might write something with a similar feeling. It’s quite peaceful and back to basics, like being there at creation and seeing the fundamentals of purpose without anything clouding the view.

Both bird and flower bring us so much joy, but neither, I believe, have any idea. They are just living in that space where all things have a known purpose and fulfill it. With beauty being a perk rather than an aim. Had an owl visitor myself last night, such majestic birds, and—the most amazing thing—we regarded each other for a good five minutes before he flew away. I wonder what they think of us.

I really enjoyed your poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Funny what tweaks our thoughts
It was the thought of a crystal clear drop of water on an indi.. read more
something, some purpose to hang onto...we all need that...and we also need nourishment...sometimes just in support of friends...a raindrop is a friend to a petal.
all are fundamental for everything to work in unison.
we need peace...we need to all sit serenely in a garden of love.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

garden it is and gardening we are
This is our stay at home away from it all until the world g.. read more
so lovely, good morning dave
enjoy your garden today

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

good morning Ana Papaya
enjoy your garden and your day and bless the birds and flowers
I like this, this is wonderful

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

thanks for your visit and glad you enjoyed
ain't life grand

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Dave Brown

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