A Poem by Dave Brown

how its done


The Lilies loafed lazily

In the noonday sun

The Poppies peeked pleasantly,

Each and every one

The Cosmos colored casually

From their heads down to their toes

All these little pleasantries

Is how the garden glows

© 2020 Dave Brown

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The meter in this is spot on. Fantastic poem.
It's delightfully charming.

Posted 1 Month Ago

Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

'Meter' he said, as he scratched his head, don't know if that's somethin bout which I ev'r read.
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Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

I don't know, just a silly buzzword we use to make ourselves appear poetically smart
and all of the alliteration that blossomed in this poem helps make it feel so serene.

Posted 1 Month Ago

Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

its the flowers Jacob
they made me do it
enjoy your day

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Added on June 1, 2020
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Dave Brown
Dave Brown

gabriola island, BC - British Columbia, Canada

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