A Chapter by Dave Brown



Mike-ten and Flik-ten were always fight-en-ing

The noise was very fright-en-ing

To soften their aggressive stance

They became involved in friendly sing-en-ing


The songs they sang were fab to hear

Melodies joyfully danced through each ear

Their fame grew at every fan’s glance

Until Flik-en one day, was to disappear


Constabulary were summoned tout-de-suite

Straight to the cinema, rushed the whole fleet

At head of all, not just by chance

The famous inspector, ‘Either Woner Twofeet’


‘Twofeet’ took statements from those around

Those lamenting the missing sound

Many saddened since no song and dance

All about were frustratingly frowned


‘Either Woner Twofeet’ well knew of jealousy

On Mike-ten, such signs he did see

Most thought it was just the circumstance

But the Inspector forced a confession, eventually


Flik-en had been hidden in San Jose

That only Mike-ten could sing the hit song of the day

But all was forgiven after a kick-in-the-pants

With no more possibility of Mike-ten going astray


This was ‘Either Woner Twofeet’s’ amazing forte

Making those greatest mysteries, all go away

Against failure he forever took a strong stance

And his men offered a, Hip Hip Hooray




© 2020 Dave Brown

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An interesting poem. Your writing is very creative. Congratulations!

Posted 1 Year Ago

Dave Brown

1 Year Ago

thankyou Heider
appreciate your visit and comment
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I had to read this from top to bottom, bottom to top, then back down, a great Melody plays out, with a folklore message. But sounds like Oasis in my mind. The wording holds some formatted mystery box doubt. I like what you've done here!

Posted 1 Year Ago

Dave Brown

1 Year Ago

Thanks for taking the time to wade through it all.
The Inspector appreciates your attention

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Last Updated on September 5, 2020

Mostly light Hearted


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