Raymond

Raymond

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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fragile friendships

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Raymond Rabbit ravenously roamed

His empty stomach continually groaned

Finally finding a full field of wheat

On his hungry haunches, started to eat

 

Eddie the Eagle, up in the sky

Thoroughly enjoying his usual high

On this occasion, Eddie did Raymond spy

And initiated a ‘grab a rabbit’ type try

 

But these two had long been great friends

An embarrassed Eddie made quick amends

Consuming good friends, created bad trends

Additionally, Raymond owned a Mercedes Benz  

 

Driving to Tim Horton’s for a meal deal

Would solve both of their hungers for real

But Eddie’s hunger couldn’t last quite that far

So, he ate Raymond and then kept his car



© 2020 Dave Brown


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Bad Eddie. Say after me "I must not eat my friends and aquire their chattels" Bad, bad, boy :)) Be careful who you make friends with Dave. A lesson for all :)

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