A Chapter by Dave Brown

fragile friendships


Raymond Rabbit ravenously roamed

His empty stomach continually groaned

Finally finding a full field of wheat

On his hungry haunches, started to eat


Eddie the Eagle, up in the sky

Thoroughly enjoying his usual high

On this occasion, Eddie did Raymond spy

And initiated a ‘grab a rabbit’ type try


But these two had long been great friends

An embarrassed Eddie made quick amends

Consuming good friends, created bad trends

Additionally, Raymond owned a Mercedes Benz  


Driving to Tim Horton’s for a meal deal

Would solve both of their hungers for real

But Eddie’s hunger couldn’t last quite that far

So, he ate Raymond and then kept his car

© 2020 Dave Brown

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Bad Eddie. Say after me "I must not eat my friends and aquire their chattels" Bad, bad, boy :)) Be careful who you make friends with Dave. A lesson for all :)


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Added on July 13, 2020
Last Updated on September 5, 2020

Mostly light Hearted


Dave Brown
Dave Brown

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