Pointless?

Pointless?

A Poem by Dave Brown
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event

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Seems like my disposable commodity

Is just one more of too many already

From those that have, to those that don’t

Different labels for the one unibody

 

I follow the crowd wherever allowed

Carefully long the straight and narrow

Blending in with the untold masses

As neither Sparrow nor as Pharaoh

 

And when my parts are terminal toast

I wonder what the hell has it meant

To exist to just fade away

It all seems like a pointless event

 

© 2020 Dave Brown


Author's Note

Dave Brown
might as wella stayed in bed

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a life of mediocrity...might be safe, but not rewarding...we have to push ourselves to be all we can be....
and get up each day feeling we have a purpose, and that we matter.

Posted 4 Days Ago


Dave Brown

4 Days Ago

I'm finding that sometimes the purpose of that purpose becomes a bit foggy
Good morn Jacob
The middle ground gets you nowhere. That's where ordinary people live. You have to stick out like a sore thumb to be different. You still got time.
l'm sticking to the middle road. Edging my bets :)

Chris

Posted 5 Days Ago


Dave Brown

5 Days Ago

these are words of wisdom which I will carefully adhere to because the prospect of sticking out like.. read more
Feels like some serious existential questions here.
Deep thoughts, Dave.

Posted 5 Days Ago


Ana Papaya

5 Days Ago

:) the doors come off so maybe the hinge is different?
Dave Brown

5 Days Ago

Ya man!............))
Ana Papaya

5 Days Ago

Lol! ( :

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Dave Brown
Dave Brown

gabriola island, BC - British Columbia, Canada



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