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Fireflies

Fireflies

A Poem by Dave Brown
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soft sound

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When day’s light was spent

Taking brightness from sky

It had purposely left behind

Each twinkle in your each eye

 

To brightly shine neath night’s moon

That we enjoy our chance

Enmeshed in its gentle glow

To share magic of romance

 

As night’s light dancing reflections

Join moon beams in flow

I'll bathed in your love light

Sipping each drop of afterglow

 

Evening became our orchestra

With its crescendo being crowned

Until quiet flight of fireflies

Became last of night’s soft sound

 

 

© 2021 Dave Brown


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such a lovely piece of poetry. Enjoyed this immensely

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

thank your for your visit and comment
Good rhyming and imagery, Dave. A very romantic piece.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Dave Brown

5 Months Ago

thanks John
One of my most favorite songs is called Fireflies. I was so drawn to this piece. The imagery is beautiful and pulled me in so warmly. It sounds like such a wonderful and dream filled night. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

they do seem to represent romantic nights
I haven't heard that song, have to keep my ears ope.. read more
Nicole

10 Months Ago

You're welcome! Fireflies is an old Fleetwood Mac song off one of their live albums. It's wonderful!.. read more
Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

.............U2..................
Dave, this is gorgeous. Wow!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

Thanks Ana
I see i'd like to make a couple of changes but when I do that 'it' changes back to.. read more
Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

We had a big storm last night and looks like we're in for another. I do think BC is beautiful and .. read more
This is an excellent way to use nature imagery to tell a story & to describe feelings without actually putting everything into the words of romance. Even tho this is simply stated, I love the romantic way this line is expressed: "As I bathed in your love light sipping each drop very slow" . . . I think fireflies is an apt metaphor becuz their light often feels like it's flickering or barely-there . . . this is also how love can feel, flickering between the lightly romantic moments & the ongoing daily drudgery (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 10 Months Ago


Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

and hugs to you Margie all in the name of romance
not sure I've ever seen a firefly
ha.. read more

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Dave Brown
Dave Brown

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