Rodeo flop

Rodeo flop

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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wrong stop

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Beatrice the barfly sat in the saloon

Waitin fer Bart, she’d left him some room

They were gunna hit the trail, rodeo stuff

Both Beatrice and Bart were purdy tough

 

But booze also had a purdy tough pull

To this Hombre and Hombrete it was a pill

Nothin could happin till least takin one sip

This day, it would be delayin their trip

 

Barfly and Barguy kept tipping it back

Till lights out, and them both loosing track

No moral to this tale, just a couple a drunks

Ending up smellin like a couple a skunks

 

The bartender, a weight lifter named Hugh

With these two, knew just what to do

Onto the boardwalk he threw the soused pair

With their rodeo day, ending up down there

 

 

 



© 2020 Dave Brown


Author's Note

Dave Brown
I had to find out what happened to Jacob's barfly
I can't handle loose endings

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Sometimes things go overboard with the booze. Lofty plans bit the dust or should I say the boardwalk? Maybe the bartender returned with a blanket each...

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

this is a result of Jacobs 'barfly' poem
That bartender was so used to drunks he just left th.. read more
AJNJ

1 Month Ago

I hope they didn't freeze :'(
Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

(,....................!!.......................)
Nice to have closure but this pair didnt wind up with a happy ending.
Humour piece! I guess they earned their place on the boardwalk. :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Yes. My dog is absolutely nicer than yours. :)
I'm pretty sure.
Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

reality is a foreign concept to some folks
Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Nothing to be ashamed of. :)

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