Boogie Woogie

Boogie Woogie

A Chapter by Dave Brown
"

all night long

"

I put a poem in my wallet

Then sat down for lunch

And as I settled there, in my chair

I heard a loud crunch

 

Then funny things

All started to happin

A buncha poem-y type words had fallen

And they were doing some dancin

 

Then my wallet joined them

And all were dancin around

But for some reason

The waitress had frowned

 

She didn’t recognize the music

So, all the letters filled her in

And for all the rest of the night

We were all a-boogie woogie-in

 

 



© 2020 Dave Brown


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Clearly this is autobiographical, since you are chronically prolific. There must be poems & letters & words & paragraphs & rhymes bursting out of your every orifice, not just your wallet, judging from the massive anthologies you've posted here at the cafe. Too bad your poem fails to make a connection between ARTISTRY & your WALLET ($$$$$) . . . might as well boogie woogie with our words since nobody is filling our wallets for a chance to read them! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

I think you should go into the 'will supply comment' business.
monies gained there, along wit.. read more
A livelier, more colorful process than most.
Delightful, cartoonish imagery.
Entertaining read!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Dave Brown

6 Months Ago

Thanks
even those busted up poems deserve a bit of fun
Ok. I think it's a bit before my time but wasn't there a song about boogie boogie dancing shoes?
I want to find that song now! Glad the night ended on the right note here.
:)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Ana Papaya

6 Months Ago

Lol. You're so uber cool, Dave. :)
Dave Brown

6 Months Ago

haha very funny (doll face)
Ana Papaya

6 Months Ago

Lol! : )
not a bad way to spend a 'boogie' night although she was probably more interested in her tip than the poesy. i'm wondering if anyone got 'tipsy' during all that dancing. you've weaved a cute, clever little tale here, complete with platform shoes. you just can't keep a good poem down. now you've got me watching boogie videos/songs ... :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Dave Brown

6 Months Ago

for sure, there is a whole lotta shakin goin on!
Thanks for visit Pete
Pete

6 Months Ago

this inspired a write, will be sending you a read request if that's okay ... :)
Dave Brown

6 Months Ago

.............will be waiting
I never know what is out there so it is good to know something i.. read more
Giggling here.....a dancing wallet and dancing words? Well, of course the waitress joined in. She wanted a decent tip! :) This is just adorable and I could picture it all in my mind. Great work. Lydi**

Posted 6 Months Ago


Dave Brown

6 Months Ago

Oh yah, the 'tip'
wonder who should tip whom??
Have a good day Lydia
Lydia Shutter

6 Months Ago

You as well, Dave.

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