Boogie Woogie

all night long

I put a poem in my wallet

Then sat down for lunch

And as I settled there, in my chair

I heard a loud crunch

 

Then funny things

All started to happin

A buncha poem-y type words had fallen

And they were doing some dancin

 

Then my wallet joined them

And all were dancin around

But for some reason

The waitress had frowned

 

She didn’t recognize the music

So, all the letters filled her in

And for all the rest of the night

We were all a-boogie woogie-in

 

 

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

A livelier, more colorful process than most.
Delightful, cartoonish imagery.
Entertaining read!

[Dave Brown]

Thanks
even those busted up poems deserve a bit of fun

[Ana Papaya]

Ok. I think it's a bit before my time but wasn't there a song about boogie boogie dancing shoes?
I want to find that song now! Glad the night ended on the right note here.
:)

[Dave Brown]

Ya man, but I so totally like forget the right on lyrics and the tag of the music makin heavy/ette
U like so rad know
Doodette

[Ana Papaya]

Lol. You're so uber cool, Dave. :)

[Dave Brown]

haha very funny (doll face)

[Ana Papaya]

Lol! : )

[Pete]

not a bad way to spend a 'boogie' night although she was probably more interested in her tip than the poesy. i'm wondering if anyone got 'tipsy' during all that dancing. you've weaved a cute, clever little tale here, complete with platform shoes. you just can't keep a good poem down. now you've got me watching boogie videos/songs ... :)

[Dave Brown]

for sure, there is a whole lotta shakin goin on!
Thanks for visit Pete

[Pete]

this inspired a write, will be sending you a read request if that's okay ... :)

[Dave Brown]

.............will be waiting
I never know what is out there so it is good to know something is on its way

[Lydia Shutter]

Giggling here.....a dancing wallet and dancing words? Well, of course the waitress joined in. She wanted a decent tip! :) This is just adorable and I could picture it all in my mind. Great work. Lydi**

[Dave Brown]

Oh yah, the 'tip'
wonder who should tip whom??
Have a good day Lydia

[Lydia Shutter]

You as well, Dave.