Boogie Woogie

Boogie Woogie

A Chapter by Dave Brown
"

all night long

"

I put a poem in my wallet

Then sat down for lunch

And as I settled there, in my chair

I heard a loud crunch

 

Then funny things

All started to happin

A buncha poem-y type words had fallen

And they were doing some dancin

 

Then my wallet joined them

And all were dancin around

But for some reason

The waitress had frowned

 

She didn’t recognize the music

So, all the letters filled her in

And for all the rest of the night

We were all a-boogie woogie-in

 

 



© 2020 Dave Brown


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A livelier, more colorful process than most.
Delightful, cartoonish imagery.
Entertaining read!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Thanks
even those busted up poems deserve a bit of fun
Ok. I think it's a bit before my time but wasn't there a song about boogie boogie dancing shoes?
I want to find that song now! Glad the night ended on the right note here.
:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Lol. You're so uber cool, Dave. :)
Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

haha very funny (doll face)
Ana Papaya

1 Month Ago

Lol! : )
not a bad way to spend a 'boogie' night although she was probably more interested in her tip than the poesy. i'm wondering if anyone got 'tipsy' during all that dancing. you've weaved a cute, clever little tale here, complete with platform shoes. you just can't keep a good poem down. now you've got me watching boogie videos/songs ... :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

for sure, there is a whole lotta shakin goin on!
Thanks for visit Pete
Pete

1 Month Ago

this inspired a write, will be sending you a read request if that's okay ... :)
Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

.............will be waiting
I never know what is out there so it is good to know something i.. read more
Giggling here.....a dancing wallet and dancing words? Well, of course the waitress joined in. She wanted a decent tip! :) This is just adorable and I could picture it all in my mind. Great work. Lydi**

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Oh yah, the 'tip'
wonder who should tip whom??
Have a good day Lydia
Lydia Shutter

1 Month Ago

You as well, Dave.

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