Shakin

Shakin

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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n' groovin

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In the house, on the chesterfield

And the floor began to move

As I was listening to some rock n roll

The whole house began to groove

 

Window’s were all swingin wild

Door’s danced on their hinges

The carpet did the jitterbug

Light’s bee-bopped round the fringes

 

Fridge and stove did the jive

Kitchen drawers did the hip-hop

The Gyproc walls did a torrid twist

While the staircase did the bop

 

The place was shakin high and low

But the furnace got overly gassed

By the time Jim Dandy came to the rescue

That special moment had all passed

 

 



© 2020 Dave Brown


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Jim Dandy to the rescue! Now that I can relate to! For most of this, I wavered between Stevie Ray Vaughn (arguably best rock/blues guitar player, but sadly died in 1987, plane crash) anyhow, his song "If the house is a-rockin' then don't bother knockin', just come on in" . . . and the other little tidbit of brain thought about the time I moved into a very nice apartment, but the fleas were SO THICK, they picked me up & carried me around! Suffice to say, there are too many memories of me rockin' and rollin', so I'll have to just say your poem incites them all! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago


Dave Brown

7 Months Ago

Haha I've never heard either of those
Too funny
Wish I could think of those type of .. read more
barleygirl

7 Months Ago

Feel free to steal my ideas. I will have forgotten about them by morning *smile*
This sounds like a totally rockin' house. :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


Dave Brown

11 Months Ago

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