Thinking Electric

Thinking Electric

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Thinking all electric

We bought a new car

But we were shocked to find

It wouldn’t go very far

 

Truth be told

As it very well should

We discovered we’d been swindled

And the thing was almost all wood

 

But there seemed some salvation

Thoughtfully pointed out by my dear spouse

Saying, that if we can’t drive it

Let’s use it as a birdhouse



© 2020 Dave Brown


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that was too good...did not expect such a turn... where some electrical poem suddenly turned into a nature-loving person's concern... what a good idea it was...changing perspectives and also instead of acting recklessly, thoughtful processing of mind has such a wonderful outcome!!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

technology has always been a problem for me
Thanks for stopping by
Aradhana

2 Weeks Ago

You are most welcome sir!! It was my pleasure. :)
I would say you should of kicked the tires first... but then you would have splinters:/ those headlights are going to be expensive to replace I hope you have a circa 1950's radio shack nearby! but i wont blame you at all it is a handsome looking vehicle

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Dave Brown

3 Weeks Ago

For sure, parts will be a problem
we'll just have to face it all whenever
Coffee time
That is cute as heck!
And yes! Would make a great birdhouse. :)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Dave Brown

3 Weeks Ago

thanks for all your help
Ana Papaya

3 Weeks Ago

Anytime! :)

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