A Raven Calls

A Raven Calls

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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yes

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The wind was harsh

The dark sky forebode

Of a weather day

To be yet wet and cold

 

From a treetop

A raven called

 

That black shape

From the highest fir tree

That weathered warrior

Called down to me

 

Then a call from another

From another tree top

 

Forever, in this place

Always in view

A living part of the forest

Where they both grew

 

Passing through tallest trees

I walked hearing their call

 

The forest would be lonely

With no raven’s sound

Their lives are interwoven

With this hallowed ground

 

 

 

 

 



© 2020 Dave Brown


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If this was written below 13 seconds.You are the master of speed poetry. But seriously this is quiet good. Atmosphere is little darker but not scary. It's more like painted picture on dark canvas. Nature scenery of northern bard. By the way it's look like that guy below me got crush on you

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Dave Brown

8 Months Ago

Thanks Martin
God knows I'm not much of a poet, its basically just for fun
I'm sure hi.. read more
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8 Months Ago

I am also writing just for fun. I think sometimes people here forget this is site more for fun then .. read more
Dave Brown

8 Months Ago

Thanks, and I will as I hope you will also do

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