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Driving Through Curls

Driving Through Curls

A Chapter by Dave Brown



When I saw her approaching

First I noticed was her big hair

Massively huge, multi-colored

And stickin out everywhere


She had supports firmly attached    

From her hair to the ground

Long white metal pipes

That first had me spellbound


Then, as she was passing, I saw

A small city, laid out in squares

With Tim Hortons and Burger King

And patron’s driving through in pairs


It was the aroma that grabbed me

Double chocolate donut with coffee fumes

All served up among many curls

In Covid isolated, small rooms


With this being free donut weekend

We got another iced with strawberry

Good food with great service, but

Driving through curls, was really scary


© 2020 Dave Brown

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I think this chick's head should be incorporated. Maybe even allocated a stoplight.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

Incorporated is good but its possible she'll need quite a few stoplights
So we had burgers and donuts and coffee and it was all in curls! I hope your car wheels didnt get stuck in all that frizz. Ah, must be dark in there too. *Blinks and takes off her sunglasses*

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

the AC got jammed but otherwise AOK DDK
Great imagination here! Driving through all that must be tricky.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

and sticky

2 Weeks Ago

phew 😅 Yes
Ok. I'm laughing because I know this scene. More or less.
Timmy's has the best toasted coconut donuts and apple Fritters.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

Double chocolate donuts rule
Ana Papaya

2 Weeks Ago

Those are good too. :)
I suspect either the heat has affected you, you've suffered a recent head trauma or someone slipped something in your coffee (can't trust those Ruskies!). Interesting piece of abstract description.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

Boris was by!
Lol still chuckling at the idea of hair stilts. This has to be an actual billboard somewhere.
Maybe out in burmashave...

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

maybe I was high and it was just an illusion
They probably were just driving through in singl.. read more
Dripping Chocolate Madness

2 Weeks Ago

As long as you're not waiting for the stop signs to turn green.
I say you're goo.. read more

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6 Reviews
Added on September 8, 2020
Last Updated on September 10, 2020

Mostly light Hearted


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