A decent Price

A decent Price

A Chapter by Dave Brown
"

yes

"

Reaching into my chest

She pulled out my pumping heart

Then she ate it

Just like a sweet tasting tart

 

After licking her lips

Her smile was a surprise

Just before she reached up

And tore out my two eyes

 

Not yet quite finished

Grabbed my conscience and soul

And along with my intestines

Threw all in a bowl

 

Then muscles and veins

With bladder and lungs being next

Being constantly discombobulated

Was getting me real vexed

 

But when she went for my identity

She added a touch of real nice

Instead of just ripping me off

She paid me a real decent price

 

 



© 2020 Dave Brown


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Sounds like an online scammer with a cannibalistic passion! Except she tasted the goods before ripping you off. A somewhat shrewd shopper, though! Always try before you buy! I enjoyed the wit here, Dave. Very inventive.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

A true shopper's response
She probably sold the identity off for a good price. I am told that was the tastiest part. You could have negotiated.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

I'll remember that next time after I repaired myself with epimorphic regeneration
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Sounds like someone has a crush on you!

Dave and his entrails, sitting in a tree.
Slowly D-Y-I-N-G.

(Really hope you guys teased each other like that in school, or this joke plays... Totally different.)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

not even enough left to climb a tree
Perfect Halloween piece I would say.
I think we're getting close that season and this almost has that Frankenstein type feel to it mixed with Macbeth.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

will you be revealing your halloween inspired offerings
Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

I have a few I might feature but with back to school and back to work I've not been writing much. I.. read more
Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

K man
I really love this. It's so unexpected & weirdly gross but intriguing. Makes me want to launch my Halloween writing trend PRONTO! How can I bend my mind into the wild distortions your imagination can go? This is my 2020 Halloween challenge. You've set the bar here. Usually when a writer puts a "twist" at the end, it's never as twisted as the twist at the end of this poem! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 10 Months Ago


barleygirl

10 Months Ago

A very nice vampire with uncontrollable urges? I can't believe you'd write about me without telling .. read more
Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

HaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHa would you have paid??
barleygirl

10 Months Ago

HaHaHaHaHaHa yourself!
That's what you get for telling her 'dinner at eight'! A rather eviscerating piece of humour that leaves the question as to what she did with the unmentioned parts!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

( huh)
John Alexander McFadyen

10 Months Ago

My comment;Dinner at ate!!
Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

you have to remember who(m) you R dealing with
Oh my oh my Dave. You do mix in strange circles :) This reminded me of a female Hannibal Lecter without the chianti :) I D theft sounds easy in comparison to the alternative here. Happy Wednesday, and to your muse too. Where will she take you next?

Chris

Posted 10 Months Ago


Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

good aft Chris
It must be the heat, we are getting some late summer scorching and it is doing.. read more
Chris Shaw

10 Months Ago

Don't talk slugs and snails. Dirty words for a gardner. All good here:)
Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

( heh )
I don't really understand the undertones of the story and would appreciate and explanation. Also, what's a touch of real nice?

Posted 10 Months Ago


Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

On the offhand chance that this is not your subtle way of telling me that my poem/s (?) is hardly wo.. read more
MantaStyle

10 Months Ago

I'm really sorry if you thought that as i do not think nor wish to imply that your work is not worth.. read more
Dave Brown

10 Months Ago

I am not offended
hope I cleared things up

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