A decent Price

A decent Price

A Chapter by Dave Brown
"

yes

"

Reaching into my chest

She pulled out my pumping heart

Then she ate it

Just like a sweet tasting tart

 

After licking her lips

Her smile was a surprise

Just before she reached up

And tore out my two eyes

 

Not yet quite finished

Grabbed my conscience and soul

And along with my intestines

Threw all in a bowl

 

Then muscles and veins

With bladder and lungs being next

Being constantly discombobulated

Was getting me real vexed

 

But when she went for my identity

She added a touch of real nice

Instead of just ripping me off

She paid me a real decent price

 

 



© 2020 Dave Brown


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Sounds like an online scammer with a cannibalistic passion! Except she tasted the goods before ripping you off. A somewhat shrewd shopper, though! Always try before you buy! I enjoyed the wit here, Dave. Very inventive.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Dave Brown

1 Week Ago

A true shopper's response
She probably sold the identity off for a good price. I am told that was the tastiest part. You could have negotiated.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Dave Brown

1 Week Ago

I'll remember that next time after I repaired myself with epimorphic regeneration
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Sounds like someone has a crush on you!

Dave and his entrails, sitting in a tree.
Slowly D-Y-I-N-G.

(Really hope you guys teased each other like that in school, or this joke plays... Totally different.)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

not even enough left to climb a tree
Perfect Halloween piece I would say.
I think we're getting close that season and this almost has that Frankenstein type feel to it mixed with Macbeth.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

will you be revealing your halloween inspired offerings
Ana Papaya

2 Weeks Ago

I have a few I might feature but with back to school and back to work I've not been writing much. I.. read more
Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

K man
I really love this. It's so unexpected & weirdly gross but intriguing. Makes me want to launch my Halloween writing trend PRONTO! How can I bend my mind into the wild distortions your imagination can go? This is my 2020 Halloween challenge. You've set the bar here. Usually when a writer puts a "twist" at the end, it's never as twisted as the twist at the end of this poem! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

A very nice vampire with uncontrollable urges? I can't believe you'd write about me without telling .. read more
Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

HaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHa would you have paid??
barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

HaHaHaHaHaHa yourself!
That's what you get for telling her 'dinner at eight'! A rather eviscerating piece of humour that leaves the question as to what she did with the unmentioned parts!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

( huh)
John Alexander McFadyen

2 Weeks Ago

My comment;Dinner at ate!!
Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

you have to remember who(m) you R dealing with
Oh my oh my Dave. You do mix in strange circles :) This reminded me of a female Hannibal Lecter without the chianti :) I D theft sounds easy in comparison to the alternative here. Happy Wednesday, and to your muse too. Where will she take you next?

Chris

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

good aft Chris
It must be the heat, we are getting some late summer scorching and it is doing.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Weeks Ago

Don't talk slugs and snails. Dirty words for a gardner. All good here:)
Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

( heh )
I don't really understand the undertones of the story and would appreciate and explanation. Also, what's a touch of real nice?

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

On the offhand chance that this is not your subtle way of telling me that my poem/s (?) is hardly wo.. read more
MantaStyle

2 Weeks Ago

I'm really sorry if you thought that as i do not think nor wish to imply that your work is not worth.. read more
Dave Brown

2 Weeks Ago

I am not offended
hope I cleared things up

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