Where Nectar Waits

Where Nectar Waits

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Hoovering

Quickly darting

An instant passage

Round garden plantings

Then tarries to taste, till haste

Calls away to a further bloom

Where nectar’s sweet awaits

Their iridescent coloring

That shines longside

Petals opened to

Welcome



© 2020 Dave Brown


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I love the title of your poem. I kinda want to steal your idea, twist it a bit, & make it my own. How about "where the sweet peas wait"? (Just planted two planters of them yesterday). As I've told you often the hummingbird traffic in my garden is heavy & always welcome. I love how you never use the word "hum" or anything hinting at hummingbirds, but becuz of how you SHOW instead of tell, we can visualize movements which can only be those of a special tiny bird we all know & love. I also find it interesting that you've done a bit of typesetting . . . possibly an abstract blob of nectar splattered upon the page? *smile* Fondly, Margie

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barleygirl

3 Months Ago

Ransacking . . . this is what's going on in my garden constantly now that all the food sources must .. read more
Dave Brown

3 Months Ago

poem ?
barleygirl

3 Months Ago

I definitely need to write the ransacking poem . . .

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