Good Advise

Good Advise

A Chapter by Dave Brown



I feel an ice cream bar in front

Is much better than in back

Especially if that innocent bar

Receives a flattening,180lb attack


Which happened while walking

On some slippery ice

When the slippee

Had not taken good advise


About taking any advise from wives

A husband should be more inclined

With there being much less of a possibility

As in this case, of a damaged behind


And the resulting lack of sympathy

That from her, I had then gotten

Just added more pain

To that already, excessively sore spotten



© 2020 Dave Brown

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Ha! Listen to your Mrs is the moral here. She knows best :)) Sending a little sympathy, but not too much Dave. Funny poem.


Posted 7 Months Ago

Dave Brown

7 Months Ago

I have to admit, they definitely come in handy, at times!
Chris Shaw

7 Months Ago

That is the correct answer :)
Minor point: Asvise is something you do. Advice is something you get.

Posted 7 Months Ago

Dave Brown

7 Months Ago

have you been talking to my wife?

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Added on December 16, 2020
Last Updated on December 21, 2020

Mostly light Hearted


Dave Brown
Dave Brown

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