Good Advise

I feel an ice cream bar in front

Is much better than in back

Especially if that innocent bar

Receives a flattening,180lb attack

 

Which happened while walking

On some slippery ice

When the slippee

Had not taken good advise

 

About taking any advise from wives

A husband should be more inclined

With there being much less of a possibility

As in this case, of a damaged behind

 

And the resulting lack of sympathy

That from her, I had then gotten

Just added more pain

To that already, excessively sore spotten

 

 

Reviews

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Ha! Listen to your Mrs is the moral here. She knows best :)) Sending a little sympathy, but not too much Dave. Funny poem.

Chris

[Dave Brown]

I have to admit, they definitely come in handy, at times!

[Christine Anne Shaw]

That is the correct answer :)

[JayG]

Minor point: Asvise is something you do. Advice is something you get.

[Dave Brown]

have you been talking to my wife?