Bee Bopped

Bee Bopped

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Bee bopping, heart stopping

Whole new year

Ready to be a-popping

All the stars are getting aligned

That old year will soon be

Impossible to find

But I doubt anyone out there

Could possibly mind

With us are on the verge

Of a Covid goodbye

And also a big wave

To a sore looser type guy

Even the days are

Feeling upbeat

With an extension of day's light

Now a daily feat

And thoughts now turn to diets

After a nuther

Huge Christmas eat

Leaving me again unable

To see my feet

Which is an ongoing

Christmas repeat

But now that new year is waiting

With open arms

I am once again looking forward

To savoring each of her sweet charms

 

 

 



© 2021 Dave Brown


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I'm feeling satisfaction . . . seeing you suffer the repercussions of living in a spoiled cookie coma. Thankfully I cannot overeat since my singular splurge, a pumpkin pie, has a crust between leather & stale tortilla, so it cannot be gobbled too hastily or I might break a tooth. The longer it sits, the more the crust softens. This is a built-in dieting feature so my elastic waistband does not burst & fray.

I'm not to the point of delirious sing-song celebration over the joys heading our way in 2021, but your poem certainly brainwashes a scrooge into releasing a smidgen of pessimism. Is that too many big words for you? Sorry I've been mainlining coffee for 3 hours & it aggravates my pompous-vocabulary syndrome *wink! wink!* Happy New Year, in case you hadn't seen it coming (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago


Dave Brown

7 Months Ago

'Cookie coma'
Very funny
I only write these imitations of so called poems hoping that .. read more
barleygirl

7 Months Ago

Thank you for reviewing kudos. I consider it a challenge, for sure! Dogs still under the electric bl.. read more

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Added on December 27, 2020
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