A Chapter by Dave Brown



We sat together

At the mouth of his cave

Looking over at me

A monster yawn

Was what he gave

The winter so mild

He was unable to sleep

An he’d decided to roam

Back through wild’s deep


He stirred his great body

I was amazed at his size

Like a massive semi trailer

Hauling supplies

A huge fallen fir blocked his way

He took one huge paw

And thrust it away

Then, his great girth

Lumbered out of the cave

Raised up on two huge back feet

Let out a deafening roar

Stretched up against a thick standing fir

Sunk his claws into the bark

At his full height

Then after marking his territory

He looked back at me

And as he lumbered into the forest

He raised a front paw with a wave





© 2021 Dave Brown

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This may be my favorite one from you so far. For a moment I was out there in the forest looking at a grizzly bear. Great work!

Posted 4 Days Ago

Dave Brown

4 Days Ago

I'm not saying that he will be friendly toward everyone but we have had him over to watch TV a coupl.. read more
What a fun, rhyming poem! Love the imagery and the story of it!

Posted 1 Month Ago

Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Thanks for taking the time to offer a pleasant comment
This is a cute little poem :) I like the rhyme and the story about the bear. Good poem! 100/100

Posted 1 Month Ago

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