An Aussie

An Aussie

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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An Aussie lass who was quite a wonder

Had both her wazoos spill all asunder

Each a monument

They tipped her continent

And the whole thing just slipped right down under



© 2021 Dave Brown


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Both wazoos split asunder? Continent be damned; we're talking incontinent here.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

LOL .
Very clever! Excellent limerick structure & substance! Perfect subtlety in referring to bazoombas! But the "down under" tie-in truly makes this thing sing! You're getting might good at these limericks & I'm dying to give you some competition, but I'm determined to stay focused on my book! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

does this suggest you will be focusing off
barleygirl

1 Month Ago

I'm about halfway thru my book . . . one month of writing, 130 pages, & 20 chapters so far. This is .. read more
Pretty Cute to boot... down under where Kangaroos romp and play with Aussies.
Bravely, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

And Kookaburras are stuck on gum trees
Hello Pat
Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

Your poem is a very priceless Conjecture ...
truly, Pat

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