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Bachelors

Bachelors

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Three damsels who each sought a mate

With a desire to cohabitate

Went upon a walk

Intending to gawk

At three fine fellows to encapsulate

 

Tho’ these dear ladies were fairly sotted

Three gentlemen were quite quickly spotted

Each discerning eye

Nabbed one drunken guy

Before each one knew, he had been gotted

 

The conclusion to this gotted affair

Each of the six were to happily pair

Tho’ if out drinking

Consider some thinking

And be aware of the bachelor snare

                    



© 2021 Dave Brown


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The wittiness to the rhythm reminds of an Irish style poem for some reason. The unity of the stanzas in their line lengths I appreciate, which adds to its cleverness💙

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to offer a comment
Shidare

1 Month Ago

You are very welcome 💖
Is this a limerick? It sounds like one :) (Edit: I just saw that this was put into a book of limericks! Ha, I guess my guessing was right! :)) This is a good one, Dave! Very funny and light, and my first thought was, "I love how he just put a smiley face as a description on this one"...This kinda reminds me of something that happened the other day, my dad was on the phone with my aunt and she was on speaker so I could hear her too and one of the things she said was, "Well, when you're drunk, all you're thinking is, 'Don't get kidnapped'" Lol. Guten morgen (Almost afternoon), This was a giggle-worthy little read!

Kindly, Nix ❤️️

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Sounds like a dangerous place
Nix is typing...

1 Month Ago

Downtown Athens can be a dangerous place sometimes, there's lotsa stuff that can go down there. But .. read more
Ha! Nice one Dave. Happy St Patty's!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Late greetings to you
Hope you enjoyed
Ha! I don't think this threat will somehow stop the fellers from visiting the boozer. You know it might encourage it. This reminded me of press gangs. Funny and visual with it Dave. Good morning from over here.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

I think you are quite right but a foggy way to start an affair
and a good morn 2U2
This gave me quite the laugh. Yes fellows beware of the ladies seeking snag you

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Chris is probably right, most guys would be happy to be snagged
Good Morn
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

That is most likely the truth

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