A Chapter by Dave Brown



I like to checkem out



What about the little ones

Well, size does matter

Although, they are all pretty nice

But ya

The bigger ones are really decent

And they get lots of looks


Shouldn’t just run up and grab

No, not cool

A soft touch mostly

To feel if they are firm


Often it’s the way they are displayed

For sure

Properly displayed is the thing

Hard to ignore

What about a whole table full

Oooh ya!

Do you just shop through the week


Not weekends


Good thing they’re not six feet apart



© 2021 Dave Brown

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I’m not exactly sure what is being checked out but it must be very interesting. I know what my brain is thinking but my guess is a tomato or a melon of some kind but that is not what my first thought would be

Posted 4 Months Ago

Dave Brown

4 Months Ago

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I love how your descriptions of things are emojis :) That's so cute... I liked this, Dave, but of course, my barely adult(ish) brain is gonna pervert this into something it's totally not about...like...this could be about oranges, or something, but I like the whole...feeling like I'm in a conversation with a sweed... "Yhu like zese oranges? zey're nice and firm!" "JAH!" This is a funny little poem, Dave...I vonder vat it's about! :)

Kindly, Nix ❤️️

Posted 4 Months Ago

Dave Brown

4 Months Ago

I'm just foolin around with this Nix
Don't look for common sense. I don't believe there is an.. read more
Dave Brown

4 Months Ago

In fact, since we seem to be communicating, try not to take anything I say too seriously
I a.. read more
Nix is typing...

4 Months Ago

Hehe, well I like your silly writes, Dave :) They're cute, and they make me giggle :) Thank you for .. read more

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Added on March 17, 2021
Last Updated on March 20, 2021

Mostly light Hearted


Dave Brown
Dave Brown

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