Just Talking

Just Talking

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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While working in the garden 

A chicken came beside and sat

And she started talking

About just this and that

Mentioning plants, we’d grown

And how lovely were the flowers

How at her coop window

She’d watch them through the hours

How the sheep in the meadow

Were such a lovely group

But how she had to carefully

Step around their poop

How a strange rooster

Had been makin overt advances

And how she didn’t want

To take romantic chances                 

The state of the economy

The rising cost of fuel

And how in the future

When she came to sit beside

She could use a taller stool



© 2021 Dave Brown


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That chicken ain't no rooster.
The price of fuel, don't get me started, especially as a barrel of oil has plummeted in price. The chicken knows it and so do we, we're getting ripped off. As for the question, why did the chicken cross the road. No chicken would make it across a British road, not with potholes as big as craters.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

funny you say that, well, sorta funny, actually more interesting leaning toward the humorous side be.. read more
Paul Bell

1 Month Ago

I love people like that. You don't have to explain anything to them, though you do have to leave the.. read more
The right medication can eliminate loquacious chickens.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

harsh .
Dave putting politics aside, i love the story the chicken could care less but she bat an eye while you drop the seed, that raw yet true poetry, as the world moves on, ups or downs, I got you babe. thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Thanks Mauricio, both the chicken and I appreciate you taking the time to visit
Hope all goes.. read more
Mauricio Montoya

1 Month Ago

as God allows it or what we see, lol or read.
Everybody talks about gas prices when they could be finding out about road crossings, what a wasted opportunity.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Delmar Cooper

1 Month Ago

If it isn't true it should be.
Hawaiian_fire

1 Month Ago

I had to jump into this comment as delmar's review made me chuckle. Inquiring minds would like to kn.. read more
Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

🐓 .
Very cute poem about chickens. I like chickens too both alive and meat ahaha.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Too bad for them they taste so good but they are fun to have around
JungLee

1 Month Ago

Yeh funny!
Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

🐔 .
I like it. A talking chicken. Could be more smart than the leaders in Washington D.C. Thank you Dave for sharing the fun poetry to read.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

With Covid keeping us apart, I have to take whatever conversation available, wherever I can.
.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

I enjoyed the poem Dave and you are welcome.
The meter and rhyming was smooth as glass, this was a very entertaining read. Humorous & Excellent.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Thanks for that
Nice too see a bit of Hawaii
Hawaiian_fire

1 Month Ago

You're welcome Dave. It's nice to be able to peer out of Hawaii and find gems like the piece you hav.. read more
I love this poem from the view of a chicken. 😆

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

they never seem to get a chance to say a thing so it was nice to hear her views
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

🤣🤣🤣 a different perspective on life

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