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A Chapter by Dave Brown
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He was big, very, very big

The fir tree couldn’t hold back

As he yanked it up by the roots

To scratch his itchy back

Then ate it in one gulp

Like a Fir scented Tic-Tac



© 2021 Dave Brown


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I wish I'd read this before I did my Sasquatch poem. The sky-high imagination here . . . scratching his back & then a fir-scented tic-tac! That's a ton of cleverness in one brief poem! Such a poem makes me feel so mundane & lowly in my weak imaginative efforts! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Dave Brown

3 Months Ago

this was of course Saskmegasuatch, king of the jungle.
Although basically quite a pleasant fe.. read more
barleygirl

3 Months Ago

Oh, that's nice . . . just grind me another pound of ground Brown . . .
I perceive this is one guy you don't want to go out of your way to offend. On the other hand, he doesn't have bad breath.

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