Steam Heat

Steam Heat

A Poem by Dave Brown



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As we drove the dark streets of Laredo

She rested her hand on my tattered jeans

Playfully toying as she silently searched

For open spots on the badly worn seams


The heat of her hand in its willful wander

Sent shots of passion into each vein

I swung the wheel of my patinaed cruiser

Quickly searching for quiet moment’s back lane


The dust of heavy braking in driest silt

Surrounded us in modesty’s sweet veil

With our turn toward each other’s hot breath

Moan’s extended from expectation’s cocktail


As dust’s veil settled, hot steam instead cloaked

While vibrating springs, recorded sweet splendor  

Till the ancient cruiser felt final’s surrender

With sounds of shaking door’s, sensual shudder


With a last gentle kiss to remember soft’s moment

I realized I’d left old Hot Rod’s ignition turned on

The dead battery had me walk her back home

Not being able to get a jump start til dawn


Next time we drove the darkened streets of Laredo

I carried with me, a battery lifetime guarantee

Since I date the battery salesman’s dear daughter

I'm assured they’ll get an instant battery boost out to me



© 2021 Dave Brown

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Once again, you're killing it. By the end of V1, I had fallen out of my wheelchair & onto the carpet. By the time I drank your elixir in V3, I was squirming on the floor in ecstasy. You know I love that fresh air country cruising connection & some horses under the hood surely brings on wet panty time. I hear ya! I feel ya! I'm just blown away becuz you've been so well-behaved all these years. Where have you been hiding all this heat, hemlock man?? (((HUGS)))

Posted 1 Week Ago

Dave Brown

1 Week Ago

Nothing like a hot car to elicit some heavy breathing
From Dr. Suess to vibrating springs. Dave, you are a man for all seasons. It sounds like the battery salesman's daughter already gave you all the boost you need.

Posted 1 Week Ago

Dave Brown

1 Week Ago

Just plug'er in and turn'er on
The results are electrifying

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Added on November 22, 2021
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Dave Brown
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