Being different is indifferent

Being different is indifferent

A Poem by David the writer
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I wrote this because I was at school, and I was reminded of a problem our school had last year. Girls excluded others because of silly things such as hair style symbols drawn on them clothes ect

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 I am me, and you are you

 Wow, I bet you can't beleive that's true

 So wonderful, so beautiful, that you are orginal

 This way of making humans is traditional

 

 I love to be honest, and tell you what I really think

 I don't like cheese because it's smell has a very nasty stink

 I bet you love cheese, but I am just different

 I bet you didn't know being different is indifferent

 

 Oh the fun, oh the intense detail, oh the massive variety

 These ideals are supported by not only by me, but also by society

 It's always fun to ask another their view

 You may just learn something new 

 

 

 

 

© 2012 David the writer


Author's Note

David the writer
This was me trying out a D.r Seuss aproach at pointing out my point :D

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It's a good concept but it definitely needs editing. The constant grammatical errors are a huge distraction.

Posted 6 Years Ago


David the writer

6 Years Ago

Yeah... i'm going to go through my writing list, and clean it up... This is pretty bad! *sigh* I tri.. read more
you are know crowned new Dr. Seusville! *crowns David*

Posted 6 Years Ago


David the writer

6 Years Ago

lol why would I want to lick Charlie Sheen?
RachelReaper

6 Years Ago

that's what I was wondering... XD
David the writer

6 Years Ago

XD
the dr seuss approach totally worked for this because I totally agree with this. a power to you for doing it in such a fabulous way!

Posted 7 Years Ago


David the writer

7 Years Ago

Thanks! U seem to like my writing
deepblue04

7 Years Ago

oh, yes! and i'm going through my read request. but I seriously do enjoy the writing
David the writer

7 Years Ago

Great to hear!
How old are you? This is just amazing. I read almost all of your writing, and almost each one of them has a message deep inside. That is why I am asking. Its ok if it is personal.

Posted 7 Years Ago


David the writer

7 Years Ago

Wow? I was told by a lot of people I was too young to write. Of course I had my supporting brothers,.. read more
Forever Hidden

7 Years Ago

Who doesn't? If you love fans, then become famous, you have to deal with it everyday! XD And, NO ONE.. read more
David the writer

7 Years Ago

Yeah, I hate it when people get jelly
wow i love this ...great write ...well done

Posted 7 Years Ago


The flow is great but more importantly the message is terrific. I love the title. Using the Cheese metaphor was great! Nice work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is good.. like it :)
great job...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lol that was pretty good man! I liked it a lot. Keep it up and you might have your own book like dr.seuss :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


David the writer

7 Years Ago

Thanx bro
Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

Anytime! Well not really but you get it :D
David the writer

7 Years Ago

Yeah I understand

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