Reprise of the Fire Dweller

Reprise of the Fire Dweller

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

The toddler sat in the high chair,

And stared at his tiny hands,

He wondered, where had they come from,

And his name, they said, was Hans,

He seemed to recall another place

Where he’d lived, so long ago,

Before he was part of the human race

Though the words, he didn’t know.

 

His body felt like an alien

It was hard to make it work,

His legs and his feet were clumsy, and

He’d only just learnt to walk,

He found that his hands could pick up things

He could drop them, or could throw,

And watch the reaction of bigger things

When they’d shout, or tell him ‘No!’

 

They both were bigger and stronger

But the biggest one was rough,

He’d lift him out of his high chair, and

His voice was deep and gruff,

The other was soft and caring and

Had fed him at the breast,

Would carry him round and cuddle him

But the voice was shrill, at best.

 

Two spirits sat on his shoulders that

He didn’t know that he had,

One kept muttering, ‘You be good!’

The other said, ‘Be bad!’

‘Don’t listen to him, he’s always grim,’

Said the good one on the right,

The other had said, ‘Remember me?

He’ll make you feel uptight!’

 

He vaguely remembered the darker one

From the place that he’d always been,

And thoughts went fluttering through his mind,

Like scenes in a distant dream,

He knew, as a thrill spilled over him

That the good one made him sad,

And he couldn’t listen to both at once

But the dark one made him glad.

 

He’d watch as the bigs lit cigarettes

And the room filled up with smoke,

The haze had returned to comfort him

Though once in a while, he’d choke.

He’d stare and stare at the cigarettes

Intent on that tiny glow,

For it lit a spark in his memory

And he suddenly thought, ‘I know!’

 

One night while the bigs were fast asleep

He crawled on out of his cot,

Went for the box of matches that

He’d seen them use, a lot.

His tiny fingers had struck a match

And he sat and watched the flame,

As the darker one on his shoulder said,

‘We’re going to play a game!’

 

He struck a match for the curtains, and

He struck a match for the couch,

He then set fire to the tablecloth

And burnt his thumb, said ‘Ouch!’

An ancient memory stirred within

That would make his face perspire,

Caught in the middle of Dresden once,

And sat in a lake of fire.

 

The big ones woke, began to choke

And rushed on out to their fate,

They tried to rescue the baby Hans

But for all of them, too late!

He sat and chuckled within the flames

Felt nothing inside his pyre,

The dark one said, ‘So much for games,

You’ve had your play in the fire!’

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2013 David Lewis Paget


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While I don't necessarily believe in reincarnation, neither do I discount the possibility. They say that children are most likely to remember previous lives; therefore, the reference to this child recalling Dresden is chilling. Totally defenseless, it was turned into a virtual lake of fire, killing a third of its inhabitants. A half a million people dead in a hailstorm of bombs, nearly one for every two people. They say that those in the center of the city could never be traced, disintegrated into the dust. Churchill and Roosevelt delivered a bloody Valentine indeed!



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I really didn't see the climax coming. I thought it would be a sweet poem about a baby and what life is like through his innocent eyes. You are a true talent, my friend!

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While I don't necessarily believe in reincarnation, neither do I discount the possibility. They say that children are most likely to remember previous lives; therefore, the reference to this child recalling Dresden is chilling. Totally defenseless, it was turned into a virtual lake of fire, killing a third of its inhabitants. A half a million people dead in a hailstorm of bombs, nearly one for every two people. They say that those in the center of the city could never be traced, disintegrated into the dust. Churchill and Roosevelt delivered a bloody Valentine indeed!



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chilling. this one is truly dark though in such a unique way. I don't subscribe to reincarnation - but I find stories like this enthralling - and this one is highly creative and with a spooky factor all of its own. I remember being three but nothing before that - I wonder why that is.


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'Danger' the sign reads.. Poe again at work here.....oh no, silly me, its David Lewis Paget esquire !

Darkly fascinating, a tremendous read once more !

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A brilliantly deep and dark piece of writing and yes, tis more writing than rhyme this time. Even the regular meter doesn't calm the content, David, One could tell from '.. From the place that he’d always been,.. ..' that something terrible was going to happen, the duel between good and bad, the thoughts behind the words. Even the word, the place, Dresden struck a cracked note. Could type on and on but won't. Tis yet another wonder .. and more.

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This started of so beautiful, making me long for my broken family to have had some traditional, loving reality. Then ended so horribly and tragic. Honestly, I sit her stumped attempting to regain composure after going on that roller coaster thank you for the share.

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A very dark one, but very close to the point for us. We had a house burn down from a 4 yo playing with matches. We were only left with the clothes we stood in, but just so glad Julie got the kids out safely. The worst part was a sad traumatised little 4 yo that was pre occupied with fire for many years. He only drew pictures of fire and would blurt out 'next time our house burns down .....' He would also sneak off with matches, psychologist explained that he was trying to recreate the situation and next time Not let it take control. He got thru it, now 40 and living on Sunshine coast with his beautiful family, we flew for his birthday 2 weeks ago.

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Whew, deep and scary. A bit Gothic in nature. Sometimes evil does win, sadly. Have a great day mate..Kathie

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Reincarnation at its worst...but the darker side doesn't always win...

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Very dark David. Unlike any of your others I've read.

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